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Twilight is a bit too trusting with the three different ex-evil mares whom she allows to freely roam her castle. Unfortunately, their friendship isn't as mutual as it's made out to be.
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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report
EagleEye, you have now officially proven your worthiness to be an author of interest to me. This story had practically everything I love about sex and cock vore! I loved the touch of Tempest's muscular physique (I have a thing for abs), the repeated mentions of the girls endowments and their nuts in particular, and of course, the Cutie Mark Stealing and Trixie's method of disposal. Absolutely delicious! To top it off, I don't even really like Starlight or Tempest as characters, but this is one where the fact I can still find them sexy is in full swing, great work!
I judge by the girls idle comments that this is tangentially connected (or at least has a similar set of events) to the stories you have where Celestia is wallowing in debauchery and has had Luna devoured. I find that interesting, even if those stories themselves are not my thing.
Posted by EagleEye 5 years ago Report
Well, thank you. I'm glad to hear it.
Posted by RandomRandy64 5 years ago Report
Please. I would love to see a continuation of this about what the said about Celestia and cadence and what was happening with them please make this a thing. Your work is great.
Posted by RandomRandy64 5 years ago Report
I now see you have already done the story of Celestia sorry it was good too.